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CatalystGirl

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I'm playing DC Universe Online a lot lately. I am training with Superman to become just like him. It's a pretty fun game and all I want to do is get that super elusive Superman armor!

Any way this is my character, CatalystGirl. She is a level 30 tank (if you know what that means). I am thinking of taking commissions to start drawing other people's DC Universe Characters too.

EDIT: I got some great initial feedback about the drawing so I am updating the drawing with some corrections from bbunnystudios. I fixed some of the stomach lines and added some shading to the arms to hopefully make the perception that they are elongated.
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ยฉ 2011 - 2024 Spacecowboytv
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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I like the colour sheme of the outfit and the background, the only thing I noticed is that her fists are too small and maybe I would elongate the arms a little bit, it doesn't seem proportionate with the rest of her body (even with the forshortening, if you were to pull down her arms and unfold her hands, her arms would still look short.)

Not to mention the black lines along her stomach meant for her abdominal muscles, it ends up making her waist look indented rather than the muscle sticking out. It would work much better without it.